Monday, September 17, 2018

Critique on someone else's work




Positives: I love how in the photos they showed who the subject[s] were clearly. We can see exactly what they are doing in each photo which allows us viewers to know what is going on in the photo instead of being clueless. Also I like how in the photo with the liquids it shows the bubbles and evaporation taking place. It is very satisfying to look at with my eyes.
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Improvement: I feel that in the photo with the three people working on a science experiment, the person who took the photo should put the camera at a angle where we can also see the fact of the girl on the left side of the photo. I believe this should improve because her face is merged with what the scope to look at specific liquids or pieces of items with. (not sure what it is called)

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